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  1. Gotta agree with the others on here that this story was very atmospheric. The way you wrote what was going on in the environment painted a vivid image in my mind. I can could hear everything as I was reading the story. Wasn’t expecting it to take the turn it did, but in the end, I think that made it have a greater impression on me.

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    • Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed. I always try to write atmospheric pieces since that’s all I’m really good at so I’m glad this turned out well. 🙂
      Oh wow, thank you! 😮 It’s always so rewarding when people take something from the words I’ve written 🙂

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  2. […] It’s been a really long time since I’ve been tagged for anything. So recently, I was tagged by Lina for this particular challenge. Thanks, Lina! I appreciate you thinking of me after you found out that I write stories and how you appreciate my ideology of incorporating several characters of various ethnic groups. You all should check out her blog if you like anime and manga. Also, this tag was created by Keiko of Keiko’s Anime Blog. […]

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  3. Ahh great job on the story! I really liked that the setting felt like a character of its own…

    I’ll have to pull out the big guns for this one, I haven’t tried writing anything that wasn’t an anime review in a long time, haha. Thank you for the tag!

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  4. I really like how atmospheric this is. Instead of going “The werewolf killed the girl” you built it up with great description and hints. It was a pretty sad story, seeing the victim confused and scared against an enemy she had no chance at all of beating.

    Also I strongly believe that it does make a sound in a forest with no observers, I’ve never really got why it wouldn’t because sound does not need an observer to happen.

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    • I’m glad you liked it! 😊
      Personally didn’t think of werewolf when writing the piece but that seems like such an interesting reading of it! It’s always rewarding when I write something and it’s interpreted in various ways. Makes me feel like I’ve done something right 😊

      That’s true I guess. I just really like that these lyrics can be read differently. Sound will always be there. It doesn’t need an observer but without an observer, whose to say whether you were really there and made that sound except for you? I like that kind of thought provoking stuff lol :’)

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  5. Thanks for the tag, and that was a wonderful read!
    Two weeks is a little difficult for me as of right now though (I’m on a bit of a hiatus). Is it alright if I take an extra week? I promise I’ll get to it!

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    • Really? I’m sorry the story went in a dark turn I guess :’) I try to be dark from time to time lol
      It’s a really good song. It’s from a musical called Dear Evan Hansen 🙂

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