The T.A.P Tag

Jenn tagged me for this cool tag called the tanka tag. I’ve not written poetry since forever so this’ll be an interesting ride. Jenn did an amazing job with her poems so do check them out!

Rules:

  1. Headline your post with “The T.A.P. Tag!” and put “tanka” as one of your tags.
  2. Make sure to link back to the original post that started the tag.
  3. Make sure to mention the person who introduced the tag to you!
  4. Pick 1-3 of your favourite anime.
  5. Write your tanka about the anime you’ve chosen. It’s fine if you decide to do only one or two if the schedule is tight.
  6. Tag at least 3 or more bloggers you know, and get their creative muscles flowing.

What is a tanka, you ask?

Tanka (短歌 tan-kah) poems are short poems that originated in Japan in the 13th century. They are five lines long and often convey deep feelings about nature, love, or desire. They usually have a structure of syllables that starts similar to haiku (5-7-5), but ends with two more 7-syllable lines, making it 5-7-5-7-7, for a total of 31 syllables.

I followed this quick guide that explained the core concepts of it, but for a TL;DR, here’s the structure of a tanka.

  • Setting up the scene (two lines that describe a moment)
  • The “pivot” line (middle line that links the top and bottom lines together)
  • The payoff (last two lines that describe your feelings toward said moment)

This is more important than following the 5-7-5-7-7 structure, but remember, you can only go LESS than 31 syllables, not more, so you can keep the spirit of the original Japanese poetry. You can be a bit freeform if you want.

I am terrible at writing poems but I’ll give it my best shot! Hopefully what I write isn’t too bad.

Okay, here we go!

 

Haikyuu

hinata

From the ground high up

he jumped reaching for the sky –

a boy from concrete

with eyes of a predator

like a black crow taking flight

 

Ano Hana

Group 9

A hot summers day

remembering you saved us all

and we said good bye

To our guilty memory –

We’ll meet again but, farewell

 

Steins;Gate

steinsgate006.jpg

Butterfly effect

Timelines and merging mem’ries

You die everytime

But I promise to save you

Not just you – but both of you

 

This was very much outside my comfort zone but it was fun. I still feel I suck at writing poetry of any sort so I’ll stick to my prose but thank you Jenn for tagging me and forcing me to do something different!

Right tags!

Shaddowcat99

Slice of Alfredo

The Spooky Red Head

Well, that’s it from me for now. I’ll see you in my next post. 🙂

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16 comments

  1. Interesting tag! I haven’t seen any of the shows you mentioned but they seem like good ones 😛

    Thank you for the tag as well! I’m already wondering how I’ll write poems like these lol

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  2. Those were some nice Tanka, not that I know much about the form, but they sounded good. I can’t wait to flex my creative mucles and write some.

    Warning, you may not see my tap post until Christmas, but it will be written!

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    • Thank you! Yeah it’s worth visiting the website that’s linked because it explains it pretty well 🙂
      Ooo I look forward to reading yours even if they are super late. Lol 🙂

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